Correct, simplify and brainstorm sharing experiences phrases

Correct the mistakes

A shocked/ frightened/ disappointed experience that I had is…

 

An experience what I will always remember/ changed my life/ comes to mind…

 

I affected by this when…

 

I experienced this two or three times in my life.

 

I have ever had the same experience.

 

The same thing was happened to me when I was in Naples.

 

When I was primary school,…

 

Simplify the sentences

 

Have you ever shopped in Akihabara?

 

I only have limited experience of this, but the food has always been good.

 

In my childhood,…

 

My most recent experience of this was…

 

One or two weeks ago,…

 

The day before yesterday or the day before that,…

 

The first time I ate French food was last year in Ginza.

 

When I was a student in kindergarten,…

 

When I was three years old,…

 

While I was walking down the street, I…

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Correct, simplify and brainstorm sharing experiences phrases

Suggested answers

 

Correct the mistakes

A shocked/ frightened/ disappointed experience that I had is… – A shocking/ frightening/ disappointing experience I had is…

An experience what I will always remember/ changed my life/ comes to mind…- An experience that/ which I will always remember/ changed my life/ comes to mind…

I affected by this when… – I was affected by this when…

I experienced this two or three times in my life. – I have experienced this two or three times in my life.

I have ever had the same experience. – I have had the same experience.

The same thing was happened to me when I was in Naples. – The same thing happened to me when I was in Naples.

When I was primary school,… – When I was in primary school,…/ When I was a primary school student,…

Simplify the sentences

Have you ever shopped in Akihabara? – Have you shopped in Akihabara?

I only have limited experience of this, but the food has always been good. – In my limited experience, the food is always good.

In my childhood,… – When I was a child,…

My most recent experience of this was… – My last experience of this was…

One or two weeks ago,… – A week or two ago,…

The day before yesterday or the day before that,… – Two or three days ago,…/ A few days ago,…

The first time I ate French food was last year in Ginza. – I first ate French food last year in Ginza.

When I was a student in kindergarten,… – When I was in kindergarten,…

When I was three years old,… – When I was three,…

While I was walking down the street, I… – While walking down the street, I…

Correct, simplify and brainstorm sharing experiences phrases

Extension – Brainstorming

Replace the underlined parts below with other possible words or phrases

A shocking/ frightening/ disappointing experience I had is…

 

An experience that/ which I will always remember/ changed my life/ comes to mind

 

 

I have experienced this two or three times in my life.

 

 

I have had the same experience.

 

 

The same thing happened to me when I was in Naples.

 

 

When I was a primary school student,…

 

 

In my limited experience, the food is always good.

 

 

When I was a child,…

 

 

My last experience of this was…

 

 

A few days ago,…

 

 

I first ate French food last year in Ginza.

 

 

While walking down the street, I…

 

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